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This was our second visit, and unfortunately, it didn't go well. We had a disappointing experience with the crab cake before Mother's Day, but we decided to give the place another chance for Saturday brunch. 
Unfortunately, our server Gianna forgot to take my order. I had to remind her that I hadn’t been served, and by that time, everyone else had already received and finished their meals. When the manager checked in on us, I mentioned that I hadn’t received my order. He quickly went to check on it. 
About five minutes later, someone brought me my food, but it was cold—except for the home fries. I didn’t see Gianna again until the end of the meal when she asked how everything was. I replied that it was cold and late, and asked for a box and some coffee. She offered to heat it up, but it didn’t make sense since everyone else was finished eating. 
A little later, the manager returned with the box and coffee. By that point, it was too late for coffee, so I decided to just take the box. This was supposed to be a birthday brunch for my stepson, and we’re now ready to move on. We'll be sticking with Starlight Diner from now on; they always get it right."